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Ready, Set, Query!

I just finished the eighth draft of my book Life in Flight. It’s actually the third time I have reworked the entire manuscript start to finish. The first five drafts were me trying to find the story.

And now I am ready to query!

Sent off my first #query letter for the memoir I finished drafting yesterday. Let the query blitz begin!#booksky

Jennifer Jordan (@jenjordan.bsky.social) 2025-07-03T16:29:31.743Z

I wrote my query letter using my voice and some phrases from the book to make it sound original. I added in some facts, but tried not to sound boring. For those readers who are unaware of the publishing lexicon, a query letter is something you write to an agent when you are looking for representation. Author and publishing expert Jane Friedman describes what these should look like for nonfiction authors.

My book can definitely be categorized as a mother/daughter story. To a certain extent, mother/daughter relationships are universal, but Latinx mother/daughter relationships are specific and complex, and this is one under-represented angle my memoir offers.

I have written and sent off query letters before, but this time around, I feel very genuinely finished with my book, in terms of the narrative. I am sure I will need to go back into the manuscript to edit, cut, and refine elements, like themes and reflection, but the bones of the book feel done. I have never felt this way before about my manuscript, so I think it’s time to celebrate this little win.

Closeup image of a fountain pen by Andreas Hoja from Pixabay

I also have a plan to not wait for an agent to publish my book. I am definitely going to try the agent route at first, and if I get no bites, I am going to send it to university and independent presses because my baby needs to grow legs and walk. I am in love with the idea of writing something new.

What would I write if I wasn’t writing the story I’ve been writing for twenty years? I am thinking I will go back to working on poetry for a while. I have unfinished poems I could revise and send out.

This is a question I get to ask myself now, and I thought I would ask you: writers, what project would you start if you were finished with your work-in-progress?

4 responses to “Ready, Set, Query!”

  1. I’m glad you mention that you’ve been working on your memoir for about 20 years. I have a novel that I started around 2008, and it’s still a mess, but I can’t let it go. I feel like I can’t do anything (anything of writing that is) until that novel is out of my hands. With me, it’s likely I will self-publish because I have a lot less time left than I did when I started ๐Ÿ˜‰

    If I’m successful and get my novel out there … I’m not sure what I’d do next. I used to feel that writing was critical to my sense of self, but not so much anymore. Or rather it’s just writing is such hard work for me. Several months ago I self-published a short story that I had started in 1992. It was fiction but it was also about my mom, about her life before I was born and while I was a teenager. I self-published and sent copies to various relatives. I felt “done” after that. Maybe because it was about my mother and I couldn’t finish it until after she died. Maybe it was too close to my heart, but why else write if what you’re writing about isn’t close to your heart?

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    1. Also, Marie, I definitely vote for your continued novel writing!!! I would so read your book ๐Ÿ˜Š

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      1. Thank you! I do need to pick it back up. I’m not getting any younger ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  2. I agree. Why write if it’s not close to your heart? I mean maybe there are reasons, but those don’t work for me ๐Ÿคช

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